Eric Raffle:

it could have been better if you didn't make his body sway so much and when it came to the part where he did that electricity effect you could have made him disappear for a few frames to give the illusion that he was moving faster, but if you had of posted your work on the site you would have made a stronger animation but I didn't see your post on work in progress at all,its a pitty as your concept was great

Nathan Greensmith:

Needs work.

Hanne Dewachter:

The animation wasn't bad but.. I just don't really understand your interpretation of the soundbite and what's supposed to go on here?

Nesir Muradov:

Unnecessary gesture on girl.

Davit Martirosyan:

Too many actions in animation but render and special effects are good

Ren:

Neat shader on him, I know its nothing to do with the animation, but I would be interested to know how you did that, really like how he translates over to her lends well to the style of your animation.

Jorge Duran Llanos:

staging