Nathan Greensmith:

Lacks fundamentals, the walk away is not great. But, I was very entertained by and loved his expression at the end.

Ezra Allen:

Zero G. Work on putting weight into your animation, try a walk cycle.

Jonathan Pangle:

There is something, um, entertaining about the expressions the characters have at the end of the animation.

Also, the video feels stretched, the wobbling in the second is distracting, and there's a flying cube over the walk cycle.

All in all, interesting ideas to begin with.