Eric Raffle:

you need to work on getting better facial expressions and you need to learn how to do the speech properly as there were a lot of parts where it did not look like they were talking properly

Nathan Greensmith:

Work on lip sync and smoother movements.

Hanne Dewachter:

Your lip sync looks pretty off, like their mouths are making completely different sounds. I suggest practicing by looking into a mirror while talking, to see how your mouth actually moves. It helps a lot!