Final Rating: 3.71. Finished 85 out of 205 entries.

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Animator: Giovanny García Crúz

Description: A kid was walking in the fair but is stopped by one strange man.

Experience: 7 months

Time taken: 3 weekends

Comments:

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Timothy Muller:

Hello.
Your story and acting has some odd spots. For example, the boy's curious tone saying "Who are you?" is more of wonder rather than what you showcase. Your boy shows a standoffish, defensive nature, which would better fit if the line was something such as "Woah. Uhh, dude, who are you?"
In addition, their animations come off as mechanical. The teacher when appearing from behind the stand is a bit too quick with little overlap. It also raises the question of how he knew the boy was coming from behind a curtain. Is it see-through?
Nevertheless, I enjoyed watching this. Continue keeping up the work.

Hernan Dario Castro:

Giovanny

Amber Chen:

cute idea