John:

As far as the composition goes, there is a lot of wasted space. Put the camera closer to your characters, considering that they stay in the same spot. Also, there are a lot of dead limbs that just don't move. Act out what you want your character to do and take note of all the little movements in all the limbs. That might help.

Xiaobai Shen:

fucking shit!

Gilberticus G. Calceta:

The camera angle is not aesthetically pleasing and doesn't really stage the characters in a visually pleasing way, making their silhouettes very unclear. The spacing of the inbetweens from the first pose of the dancing master to the second post are very even. The next two poses' actions don't read very well and are very robotic. Show some movement on the body too, even if it's subtle. Even if he's just moving his arm, the body will move too. I dare you to try moving your arm with out anything else of your body moving, especially doing a point that fierce.

Ben Smith:

That was good. Close up on the fancies would really see this become more dramatic.