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Timothy Muller:
Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!
TJ Askew:
I can't tell if you didn't have time to commit or if this is your first time animating. Either way, to make this better it needs more time, MUCH more time, and reference.
Animator: Dalton Adams
Description: Animation Class first term final
Experience: Very little, only a terms worth
Time taken: 8hrs