Final Rating: 3.70. Finished 87 out of 205 entries.

486 views including the voting period.


Animator: Alek Tolokan

Description: First animation I've posted here! The thrilling tale of a man and a boy destined to dance.

Experience: About 8 months experience working with Maya

Time taken: I honestly wasn't keeping track. More than a week on and off?


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Nassim Briedj:

too slow you have to make it more dynamic

Kazi Abu Bakkar Chisty:

nice body texture quality, specially skin tone.

Timothy Muller:

Hello there. My biggest pieces of advice for you is timing and twinning, especially for the teacher. His arms, for example, almost mirror each other in evenness and translation for the whole film. 120-150 is another example for the even timing; teacher seems to fold himself outward.
Overall, I enjoyed watching this. Keep up the good work.


I think that you've got a great base here, and that this piece would look fantastic after a bit of polish and some more work at the splining stage. The characters seem quite stiff and still very clearly move from pose to pose a bit robotically. Overlap some motion, don't be afraid to break them out of a stiff stance and you'll see a lot more fluidity come into it all.

James Trimm:

Good!! Some lip syncs off, but good level of movement.