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Timothy Muller:
Hello. Love your characters, especially the bear. My advice to you is to play with your timing. There are many moments where the animation seems stiff, possibly out of style preference? I think this would benefit with a more organic approach (doesn't mean it still can't be cartoony). Check out Aaron Blaise; he directed "Brother Bear" and is a Disney icon for animal animation. Here's his youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/user/AaronBlaiseArt/videos
I enjoyed watching this. Keep it up.
Todd Christiansen:
who are you? I'm a bear.
Shay Ganor:
Cool!!
Animator: Ori Ann Hail
Description: Do not be late for this unusual master's lesson
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 2-3 days