Final Rating: 5.51. Finished 22 out of 205 entries.

834 views including the voting period.


Animator: James Trimm

Description: ...Always two there are; no more, no less. A master and an apprentice.

Experience: 2 amateur/0 professional

Time taken: 1 week flat


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Kazi Abu Bakkar Chisty:

great body movement and soft hidden anticipation available in the video.

Nassim Briedj:

good one


Great scene setup, you've obviously put a lot of work into this. Unfortunately there seems to be a lot of stuttering and popping in his movements while he's sitting in the chair, which make it very hard to read what he's actually doing. I'd recommend taking the time to smooth those out before worrying about your rendering.

Jordan Lewers:

I almost thought this was your reference; it's so beautiful and smooth! I really would've preferred if the character were closer to the camera so we could really appreciate the subtlety

Zachary Polic:

i feel like i'd give this a better rating if the composition was closer. I can hardly see what he's doing... looks good, but can't really tell

Luis Eduardo Vallejo:

i think that the camara can be more closer

Sergio Candela Ramirez:

good job with the first part of the shot, but I believe the second part needs more movement :)

Shakya Achyut:

This is wonderful! I really like the character small shaking movements that shows his personality

Lucy Acland:

Great character animation, but I feel like it needs to be closer.