Timothy Muller:

Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also make sure to primarily budget your time for the characters and focus less of the environment, and check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!

Eric Raffle:

your poses look unnatural for the character

Akshay Mann:

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Amy Sendon:

at the beginning it was difficult to tell who was talking. The girl in the fg was moving so it naturally draws your eye to her instead of the man who was talking. It is good to keep that in mind, especially at the very beginning of the piece before the characters are established. Keep going!