Final Rating: 3.09. Finished 116 out of 205 entries.

458 views including the voting period.


Animator: Dani Youdris

Description: Felt a little more confident going into this animation vs the one from last month.

Experience: less thana year

Time taken: about 10 hours


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Kendra Kaye Coffey:

animation feels really stiff. you draw fairly well but you need to add more motion and life to your drawings. it looks like you might have a stiff hand, work on gestural drawing, it will help to loosen your hand and this will come through in your work. when your hand loosens, your work naturally will have more sense of motion to it.

Timothy Muller:

Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!

Eric Raffle:

editing the audio is against the rules, lost points

Lucy Acland:

There needs to be a lot more inbetweens.