Comments:
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Joshua Farmer:
lighting is a little much. animation is a little swimmy
Kendra Kaye Coffey:
animation was pretty good but the lighting seemed off for the scene. seemed more like the kind of lighting you would see around a campfire and less like indoor florescent lighting.
Spencer Barber:
the last shot with "your dancing master" was my favorite part, I just felt a lack of weight...
Riley Thompson:
watch your lighting, it gets really dark towards the end, also it would be really nice to see the momentum run through his body a bit more after he slams his foot down.
Animator: MC
Description: Who is that man stalking the school hallways? It's... your DANCING MISTER!
Critiques really appreaciated!
Experience: 6 months. Currently a student.
Time taken: 30 hours?