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Timothy Muller:
Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already. Shot 2, for example, doesn't work acting-wise because you are showing and telling at the same time (plus the teacher is showing off the watch to the camera more so than the student across the room).
Keep up the good work. Cheers!
Animator: Joe Harris
Description: This is my second animation I ever done in Animate
Experience: a few months
Time taken: a few weeks