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Timothy Muller:
Hello. My best advice would be to strengthen your contact poses. Think contrapposto and line of action, they'll really help. Something else that will help, but not vital, is Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators." It's a fantastic read that breaks down the acting process with great references. Keep on truckin'.
Eric Raffle:
too linear motion,very straight lines, add some curves
Animator: Liam Doyler
Description: My first attempt at character animation in maya. Really enjoyed it!
Experience: Some freelance 2D animation work
Time taken: 1 day