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11 Second Club May Submission

by Seth

Final Rating: 3.75. Finished 111 out of 185 entries.

354 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Seth

Description: Made and rendered in Maya, big thanks to animation school and CGTarian for the use of the Ray and Malcom rig.

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: I lost track.

Comments:

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HiNA:

The facial expression on the baker is amazing! but besides that everything feels really lacking. You should take more attention into corporal expression and timing- feels like they're moving underwater and its only a matter of ease in/out. Put as much care as you did in the baker's expression and you'll go long places!

Ruben Uggla:

While the movements feel a little bit floaty it's still kinda good.

Gabriel:

floaty...
make movements faster, stay longer in poses