Michaela Wadzinski:

Think about poses in silhouette, are they clear? if not make your poses stronger. Also add a little more anticipation to their motion, some things happen a little fast and the audience loses them

Lea:

You need to slow your roll on the lipsync there. Not every syllable needs to be pronounced, as it looks super unnatural and jerky.

Timothy Widawski:

Some great acting choices and feelings conveyed just the execution and some basic animation principles needed throughout with the animation fluidity.