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Wai Han Lau:
this is very good! My only criticisms are that it feels like you're putting too much poses into the shot, I feel that you need to hold certain poses a lot longer so that the movement doesn't feel as jerky. Also his head movement at 249 seems a bit robotic... I would suggest adding an inbetween in there where his head looks down, as we don't tend to move our heads in a straight line when we turn them.
Maxime Gruet-Masson:
What the fuck with his eyes ! Cool mechanic and intention anyway
David Ibarreta:
Good animation. The poses could be stronger though - with better silhouette. For example the pose at 277 is a weak since if the figure was in silhouette, it wouldn't be clear what the character was doing.
Aaron McGriff:
his eyes look really weird at the end. Kind of distracting. The rest was nice.
Ruth Agada:
I love this
Shiladitto Gupto:
good gesture, good timing, but the lip sync needs to improve..
Animator: Logan Erdner
Description: A man's friend questions him about his sudden interest in baking.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 2 weeks