Comments:
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Ruben Uggla:
The movements feel too robotic at times and too floaty at others
Richard Adams:
Poor staging, large parts of body dead still, a lot of floatiness to movements (bad). Study up on staging and on "moving holds". That will help you a lot next time.
Lea:
Pretty sure his entire hand enters into the head geometry in the beginning there. Odd camera angles too. I'd suggest doing a storyboard next time and showing other people to see if your scene makes sense to them.
Pamela Rivera:
Needs work on the camera takes. Nice scenery
Animator: Dierre Williams
Description: Two friends relaxing and one complaining about the day.
Experience: Some
Time taken: Three weeks