Comments:
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Ruben Uggla:
Overall I think both characters move to quickly and robotic. The cutaway from frames 122 to 196 is also a bit distracting. Some of the facial expressions on the baker feels a bit creepy.
Richard Adams:
Really like the 1930s feel of this one. Animation needs work though. Might want to post WIPs in the WIP sub-forum here for help in creating a much better animation next time.
Ethan Stanley:
I love the characters and the scene dressing! One thing I would say is that your characters look a bit floaty, maybe do a bit of work in the graph editor and tweak it! Great work!
Animator: kristin ruckman
Description: Customer questions Baker
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 3 weeks