Richard Adams:

Beautifully rendered--but that's a man's voice coming out of a woman's mouth. Movements rather mechanical, face needs more expressiveness.

Lea:

Using a female rig for what is a pretty masculine voice seems like an odd choice. Also try to avoid keeping your models completely still, like you have for the first 50 frames.

Shiladitto Gupto:

I just have one question, why??? It's a male voice why a girl?? About animation you need a lot to improve.. learn more read books on animation, if you are a student then learn more from your mentor, practice more and more, the more you practice the more you get better, learn the principles.

Satya:

Good try. But the characters need to move around more. Maybe before animation,just take a short video of how you would say the same dialogue.