Comments:
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Lucky Brown:
add more pose in ur dialogue, and dont leave tje guy in spec completely still when he is not talking to keep him alive.
Ruben Uggla:
The lip movement could be improved because it doesn't really match what the characters are saying. I also think that when the baker speaks the camera could be closer to his face since he is the focus and theres a lot of nothing in the background. The camera movement in the end is also a bit distracting.
:
the camera movements are kind of shaky
Animator: Juliana
Description: A college project.
Experience: One year and a half
Time taken: 4 days