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Needs work on the lip sync, maybe would look for another composition for that plane too?
Good Idea and Render
The render looks pretty good, but the animation is lacking.
Wow that was dark, not that I'm complaining. Personally I think the camera moves a bit too much.
A bit dark for this platform but look and feel wise looks nice.. even though the animation needs a lot of improvement..
The focus seems to be more on the surreal idea and the lighting than on the animation itself. It´s interesting in it´s weidness, but the movements are too basic to really get drawn into it.
More attention to the animation and less to the environment.
A+ for environment and textures!
Description: Discount! Fresh bread roll with sesame. And bonus!
Experience: 15 years as hobby
Time taken: 1 day for animation. 2 days for render