Ruben Uggla:

I think the overall speed is a bit to quick. Other than that, good. I don't know how long you've been doing this but you clearly have a lot of potential.

Tiffany Chao:

The facial expressions of the guy lying down is fairly symmetrical and could use more squash and stretch. I liked the shoulder animation as it was timely and matched the dialogue

Laurent Châtellier:

You have got a strange composition with the angle of the room drawing too much attention. (Check the web for the "rule of thirds")