Alan Leppen:

This is still a rough animation

Brian Duffy:

better to keep this in the forums for constructive feedback

Daan Mac Gillavry:

Like that its 2d but there is no real sense of movement and its very messy. You have to learn the basic especially timing and spacing and solid drawing

Mitch Wisniewski:

you haven't finished it

Tarnisha Tull:

Looks more like an animatic than an animation.