Alan Leppen:

The glow effect on the sun and the floor is a little too bright.

Brian Duffy:

the whole point of the dialogue is he's talking about him after the fact. doesn't make sense for him to deliver the line while still standing right next to him

Petr J.:

Hands are floating a bit. Be careful about arcs on the IK hands :)

Niharika:

Timing needs improvement and the Sun is way too bright and distracting

Pallav Sharma:

flouty