Comments:
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Richard Adams:
movement lacks fluidity--need more drawings per second. But I like your idea, and it's nice to see a 2d entry that is all colored in and with hidden lines removed. Fluidity comes with practice.
Kyra Simone:
Lots of movement, color and style in this one! Lots of the movements, including the 'air quotes' around 216, seem extraneous. Next time, really time the words with how the characters are moving.
Jaime Santana:
Lip sync is off and all the action is in the hands. Give the body a little love.
Animator: Volume
Description: Lily went up the tree to pick up the apples and asked Lucy to bring the ladder.Lucy forgot
Experience: Sophomores
Time taken: A week