Comments:
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John M:
Characters are too static.
Parker Rodormer:
The Mom blinks too much. The girl doesn’t blink at all.
Richard Adams:
Common problem this month, nothing actually moves except mouth and eyes. Look up "12 Principles of Animation". Very appealing drawing and coloring, though.
C h o c o b i l l y :
The camera cut breaks the 180 Degree Rule (Crosses the line).
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/180-degree_rule
https://www.mediacollege.com/video/editing/transition/reverse-cut.html
Animator: dog my cats
Description: 一个小孩和一个大人的对话
Experience: 大二学生
Time taken: 14天