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Unexpected Text

by Matt

Final Rating: 4.83. Finished 41 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Matt

Description: Two friends go out for brunch, then one gets an unexpected text.

This is my first animation in two years since I graduated.

Experience: 4 years of schooling

Time taken: 22 hours over the past month.


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jessica Castillo:

I like the acting on the first girl but the second girl feels very stiff. It would help if you animated her body and right arm a little more, not just the head and left arm. Not bad though!

Kathryn Ross:

character #2 needs body movement.

Jonathan Fontaine:

great convincing acting on the first lady !
Second onr lack emotional involvment..(body language is held back too much)

Adam O:

I actually like this a lot!