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semi-finished product

by long

Final Rating: 2.30. Finished 189 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: long

Description: semi-finished product

Experience: sophomore year

Time taken: two hours


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Richard Adams:

This is more like a slide show than an animation. The drawings and character designs are really nicely done though. Lots of appeal.

Luna Leandro:

The story is kinda confusing. Keeping it to a minumum of shots would help with clarity. The timing is weird too - lacks variation between faster and slower actions.