by Jonathan Fontaine, May Competition Winner!
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this has got to be the winner
finish please, you are very good
Lips need to articulate more
The acting and characters are great, but the lipsync isn't working. Needs more closed mouths
Aaron James Mongcopa:
mouth improvement on the "hey, hey, hey, hey" but other than that, superb animation. Winner!!!
Possible winner. Really superb animation here. Main weakness...mouse too still from frames 104-151, and 166-316. But that tiger...wow...
Beautiful animation...the numbers in the side are a little destracting
wow! great shot!
GORGEOUS. If anything I would give the mouse another pose between 159 and its last pose. But this is beautiful.
I feel like some of the lip-sync could do with tightening up a bit, more definition in some of the mouth shapes and snappier transitions between them, but otherwise this is gorgeous!
Animator: Jonathan Fontaine
Description: Mrs Lionness enjoying some water
Experience: not much
Time taken: working on and off on it, over 15 days