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Justin Vu:
Good use in staging for drama. Reduction in shot count could give more time to character performances (probably could lose shot 3; breaks 180 rule and doesn't give clear sense of character relationships or performance). 154-end is the only time we really get to see the speaker's face. Unusual to see so much arm movement without any walking or weight shifts.
Ben Zingo:
the movements seem quick and kinda janky. It might help you a lot to shoot reference video, and focus on making the animation from pose to pose really smooth and controlled. The last bit "satisfaction will be mine" is good though
杨少波:
垃圾
Daniel:
I like the "mine" at the end.
Michael Moralejo:
Good job!
Animator: Miguel
Description: A rich protagonist who shares an immortal power with others, has finally found and caught an old enemy who has a much different opinion on those who live forever.
Experience: 2 Months
Time taken: 1 Week