Comments:
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Richard Adams:
Animation a bit rough (stuttery, like an animatic), too many quick cuts, but LOVE the drawing style and character designs here. Facial expressiveness and body mechanics both excellent.
K.Rice:
Nice...but the action jumps around a tad...good drawing
Ross Payne:
It's fun. If you have less cuts then it will be clearer for the audience.
Animator: H.A. Hoffman
Description: So I've always wanted to animate but worked in the comics industry. I've only had one semester of animation class but I would appreciate constructive critique as I feel my approach is too stiff. Thank you for looking at my work!
Experience: Less than six months
Time taken: three days