Comments:
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K.Rice:
It's a tad mechanical...you need to understand the 12 Principles of Animation...find them on-line.
Taber Dunipace:
Less camera work, simplify your set up and blocking. Focus on character action.
August Leigh:
I think you may have gotten a bit excited and wanted show a lot. I would like to see more focus on the character animation. The main speaker's face barely moves except for her mouth and I'd love to see some acting and expression from her but I think you have her hit good poses.
Ross Payne:
Moving the camera is fun to do, but it makes us dizzy.
Animator: Aqsa Memon
Description: Hey everyone! This is my first entry for the 11 Second Club! As a beginner, I focused on clear poses and timing to capture joyful energy. This is a great learning experience, and I'm excited to keep improving! Any feedback is welcome! (Made with Maya)
Experience: 6 Months
Time taken: 10 days