Comments:
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K.Rice:
Nice attempt...could do with some variation...very floaty
Joshua D:
I like it a lot, my only thing is I would of loved to see a second character, but still, good job.
Carol Trezena:
I think it would help the animation to work a bit more with spacing (specially accommodations) and micro expressions variations with moving holds (the work of Joshua Schneider is a great reference to study!).
Adding a few blinks in the animation would also make it feel more organic and natural, but overall I like the main poses, specially in the "is now yours" part.
Animator: Conan Sinclair
Description: My entry to the may comp
Experience: a few years
Time taken: 2 weeks