Comments:
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K.Rice:
Nice scene. the animation is a tad mechanical and floaty...you need to understand the 12 Principles of Animation...find them on-line. Keep animating...get better.
Carol Trezena:
I really like the poses and variation on the line of action of the main character! However, I feel there is room for improvement with the animation principles. A great place to start, that would improve this scene a lot, would be getting more practice with spacing (specially accommodations); it will help the flow of the movement from one pose to another to feel more seamless and have more of a natural weight for the characters.
Animator: coconana
Description: An alien offers a Kayla a choice: return to her mundane life or explore the universe's mysteries through a forest portal.
Experience: beginner, student.
Time taken: 3 days