K.Rice:

Nice attempt...but not a lot happening...lacks expression...and a little far from the action...Keep animating.

August Leigh:

I love the blocking you've given the characters and your lip sync is well timed. I think the composition is a bit far away and creates a bit of an awkward feeling. I commend you on having one of your charcters taking steps and moving around the stage, and I'd like to see a more attention to making sure she feels like she has weight.

Dallinjc:

I like that you're trying to have one of the characters do something not directly related to delivering the line!