John Alston:

I feel like this is the best possible animation in what appears to be something like FlipAClip (phone) or Tupitube (computer).

But the lack of thin lines or dynamic lighting makes it seem a bit "there" for lack of a better word.

Jorge Femenía:

Expressions are supper nice and the idea is great, but it feels a little bit too simple. I would have love to see a wider camera angle and a little bit more of the other character