John Alston:

Way too stiff.

Yolanda:

Good staging. I'm not sure if you used any reference for your animation, but if not, try filming yourself or even ask a friend to help act out the scene and use the video as reference. Keep in mind that emotions and body gestures are essential. You could consider removing the camera panning out at the end, since it's unclear why it's needed unless you have a specific reason for it. Keep going!

Eddy Osborne:

A lil stiff, okay foundations!