Comments:
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Yolanda:
I like the staging and idea of your animation. Try recording yourself or a friend acting out the scene for reference. Focus on understanding the body’s weight shift because right now it feels like only certain body parts move while others stay still. In reality, all body parts move together to create natural motion.
Eddy Osborne:
Animation a bit slow, decent concept!
John Alston:
Too puppet-ish.
Paeton Scholes:
Adding contrapposto to the poses could make them feel stronger and more alive.
Animator: Arjun Pandya
Description: My first 11 Second Club submission. Focused on character acting, timing, and expressions. Learned a lot through this process. Animated in Maya. Feedback is welcome!
Experience: I just finished an internship and now I am looking for my first job as Character Animator.
Time taken: 5 days