John Alston:

The raccoon seem stilted.

I don't want to seem rude, bur the "cameltoe" tight jeans are distracting.

Yolanda:

Too much hand movement for the female character.

Nicholas Green:

I like the way she holds her finger up on "please" as if to say "shit up" the camera movements didn't feel right for me personally.

Ricardo Roehe:

Would be a lot better if the camera stayed still . I really like her reaction to the noise . And the "ok , just leave it" and turning away . But the "just go" is a little "all over the place" , too much movement . Maybe it would be better if she didn't turn to look at him in the end ?