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Dinner troubles

by Emily

Final Rating: 5.05. Finished 38 out of 69 entries.

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Animator: Emily

Description: Dinner is usually a wonderful experience... unless you have a clumsy waiter.

Made on toon boom.

Experience: student

Time taken: several days

Comments:

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John Alston:

Uneven and rough in places (pun not intended)

I think it's fine to have a character and "mouth hatch" like TV, but there should also be diverting things like blinks or hair movement to sell the idea.

Ritz:

Audio isn't matching the animation

Ricardo Roehe:

Cool designs . It's a little off sync , but I think it's better for you to keep onscreen the characters who are making the noises . Needs better shot / framing .