Comments:
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Piotr Skulimowski:
Not a bad story, but you lack fundamentals. Search for 12 basic rules of animation.
Sajjad Afzal:
Camera movement is distracting
Akhila:
huh???
Reginald Crumpler:
Good situation, but the character speaking had no facial expressions. Especially with him having a winning hand.
Sergio Candela Ramirez:
I dont like the camera choices that you made, I didnt understand anything almost until the end. But good job!!
Jez:
i don't think you need those camera moves (dolly, dolly zoom, pan ...ect) Thay don't bring anything to the scene (perhaps even distract viewers)
Benjamin Berg:
A couple of big problems here. The first one I noticed right away was the camera. For a scene like this, you'll only want to have a maximum of two cuts and remove camera animation. The second biggest problem is your acting. The poses in the characters don't feel natural. I would recommend taking some video reference to work from.
Keep up the hard work!
Animator: Cole Condict
Description: Young kid gets frustrated because an old pro keeps taking all his money...then makes the mistake of losing his car
Experience: 8 weeks
Time taken: a couple weeks