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He's doing a bit too much talking with his hands. Try to get the face to convey the ideas and not the hands so much.
The animation is descent and the idea is cool but the character is overacting at several points that makes the character action a bit to artificial (almost as if the character was a lousy actor reading a script).
I think it helps if you think on a golden pose and work from it.
Less hands dude....
Too many poses. Less is more.
too much movment
too much going on. But not a bad concept.
Great animation but a bit too floaty in some places
Poses are here, but not rythm
Love it XD
JONG H. GOH:
HULK action needs to be a lot snappier, doesn't feel like it's a strong hit.
Those arms must be tired hehe, I think he moves his arms way too much and it's not a very energetic dialogue, just imagine this same character when he becomes angry or excited, his hands would hit every wall. Remember, exaggeration is not only Bigger, Larger, it's also Smaller, Lower.
Something very outstanding from this is the grabbing of the cup. I see a tendency in these entries of grabbing some unneccesary items when speaking, in many cases it adds appeal and secondary action but in many cases it's very nonsense and feels like a way to scape from hand work. You really made it work by having him drink before speaking, it gives a porpose to that cup. Good one.
Also, the hulk hit was very weak :S
GJ overall :)
Trying to give an advice to the Hulk?....Oh Batman...
U got my attention sir because of batman! Too much movement imo
:D Batman seems to be really nervous because he keeps moving all the time. I love it when he taps the table with his fingers. Good job!
love the animation, but for me it seems like the lip sync is a bit off or doesnt match all that well
Funny! : D
Animator: Yeyo Wasel Cocamunga
Description: I had little problems with Malcolm's facials in Maya 2015 :(, no eyebrows or mouth moved in render, but in blayblast yes...
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