Comments:
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hamid:
what's going on ?
Piotr Skulimowski:
Camera movement makes no scene.
Filipe Pedrosa:
The camera moves and jumps too much! I would keep it to two cameras at the most, and no movement in them. I like the idea behind it, but it needs more subdued camera movements and more refined animation.
Reginald Crumpler:
This was pretty good. A bit more focus on the 2nd figure would have made it totally pop.
Janzelle:
Story telling is nice, pretty funny to see he doesn't have a gun, but the walking motion of the tan character looks a bit awkward. Lip motion is a bit too big at most times, but overall it's okay.
Brad Bradbury:
Apparntly you made the camera decisions while you were upset.
Jyrki Kanto:
The camera moves are unmotivated, and some of the cuts are really hasty. If you are going for a handheld look, it's better to rotate more and translate less.
Animator: Daniel Gomes
Description: Because as legendary gangster Al Capone once said, "you can get more of what you want with a kind word and a gun than you can with just a kind word"... even if the "gun" is not a gun at all!
Rigs used: Morpheus and Max.
Experience: About three months.
Time taken: Started about three or four weeks ago, but most of the animation was done in the last two weeks.