Piotr Skulimowski:

Story is not clear, also learn about 12 basic rules of animation.

ibet francisco:

The action is floaty.

Katie Wyman:

The acting has some good aspects to it, but it doesn't look very natural and the lip-sink needs a lot of work.

Janzelle:

lip sync could use some work. very floaty motion.

JONG H. GOH:

where did you get his haircut? awesome

Filipe Pedrosa:

Unfortunately the neon signs, hair dynamics and camera shot effect distracted from the animation rather than enhancing it, I'm afraid.