Comments:
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Donovan:
Diggin the scene, but the GUY line is being fed to a female and the lip sync seems off.
Jim:
Keep practicing. Pay attention to your arcs.
Amartya Mukherji:
Lacks fundamentals
Reginald Crumpler:
Decent lip sync, but the figures' movements made them seem like puppets on string.
Mark Laipnieks:
If the clip allows it, I think you should only focus on one character. Shoot video reference. Make notes, sketches. Lock down your key poses first.
Amrithraj:
stick upon basic principles anyway good attempt!!
Benjamin Berg:
This animation needs a lot of work. It is lacking the funamentals. I would advise you to go watch some videos on the internet or go to your local bookstore and see if you can find anything on animation. Good luck!
Animator: Paul Boogaards
Description: A person lectures another person when she wanted nothing to do with him.
Experience: 5 years of animation school, 4 years of Art school and two years of acting classes.
Time taken: A little bit each week