philipp seis:

some pretty good stuff in there. But i guess you could retime a view of the moves

Richard Carrillo:

Why the last expression? it seems a bit off, also who is he talking to? that's not clear. Anyways GJ!

Rahul Rishikesh:

An extra star for character attitude...! ;-)

hamid:

the lipsync needs more work dude

Amartya Mukherji:

very nice subtle acting

Reginald Crumpler:

EXCELLENT! : D

JONG H. GOH:

I like the 1st shot in this scene, and can tell that you are a smoker. The moment of inhaling and right after, looks really good to me. It's just that the lip sync around 'Guy' seems off.

Brad Bradbury:

The camera cut feel like a 'jump cut' and is jolting, but not in a good context way. It would have been better to rotate the camera for it's position of the close up.

srinivasrao v:

there is no energy for the character..