Moy Parra:

How long did this take???? Best to focus on the actual dialog rather than adding so much fluff!

Ben LaScala:

That was a bit dark but the male character was really cartoony, seem to draw away from the seriousness.

Paula Decanini:

I liked it until the red-shirt guy came in. His animation did not match the tone of the scene.

ibet francisco:

Too many abrupt movement. Actions are too strong for the dialogue. Nice lighting and texture.

Blond:

I lie the work on the setting. next time focus on the animation though

Alex Sinclair:

Nice setup and animation, though it would've been a bit more rewarding if the girl realized her mistake and went on living.

JONG H. GOH:

poor girl,
nice background matte. but I think when the guy talks, it looks very dark as he's staying in the shade. Probably he could step out further or adjust the lighting so the whole frame won't be covered by the shade.

Reginald Crumpler:

Excellent! : )

Yurika Nishi-Imai:

Bonnie~ Noooooo~

Eleftherios Kokkinakis:

Not enough lighting

Filipe Pedrosa:

The floating thing at the end (a wig? His/her head wrap?) confused me, and took away a bit from the animation, which is a shame because I still like it! It's nice work. Also, the guy is covered in shadow, which makes his acting harder to see.

Jyrki Kanto:

Animation seems fine, and poses are nice! It's just hard to see because of the dim and flat lighting.