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Eddie Mendez:
i like the movements from the guy, but im not sure if the audio got off sync somehow or if the animation just doesnt line up well with the audio
Marni:
Wording is a bit off from lips,
Ben LaScala:
This is a great performance but the lips are not matching up with the dialog. I think they are coming in too late. In other words the lips are too slow for the dialog. It really strong though, good job!
ibet francisco:
I like this! You dont need to pose every word.
Alex Mlqd:
KISS > keep it simple and stupid
I think you have too much poses...by the way, great render !
Katie Wyman:
I like the setting a lot, but the movements of your speaking character didn't flow very naturally. His movements and lip-sinc seemed to lag behind the audio a bit, and maybe he didn't need so many movements.
Blond:
Lip sync is off
Emily Spearman:
The mouth is pretty over-animated, especially at "decisions"
Matt Hill:
near perfect! great lighting, models and set up!
Richard Carrillo:
I really feel this setting does not fit the dialogue (seen it quite a lot, the gun pointing the speaker) unless the one being aimed at is not scared in the first place. I don't think it's natural to go from scared to such a calm and reasoning attitude in this situation. Maybe if the speaker were not scared in the first place it would work.
Anyways good job :)
Michal Shukrun:
the idea is good but the timing is not so....
Reginald Crumpler:
Pretty good! : D
Eleftherios Kokkinakis:
I love it!! Great thing you animated the hand with the gun as well. You are my favourite this month! Good luck!!
Jyrki Kanto:
This would be really good if the sound wasn't so terribly off in the end. :/ Was it maybe because of some hassle with frame rates?
Brad Bradbury:
check your arm arcs!!
Seventh animation principle - arcs.
Animator: Ahmed Nashabe
Description: A saloon bartender is held at gunpoint and tries to share some important advice with the bandit so that he may spare his life.
Experience: 3 years on and off
Time taken: about 8 hours, in 2 days.