Comments:
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Owen Fern:
Would have been nice to see his face
Tobias Fuhr:
i can't see his face and the poses are strange.
Héctor Lozano:
There's no story or apparent background and the "monster" or "dinosaur" should at least be moving a little after the stomp.
Richard Carrillo:
Nice trick to avoid Lipsync heheh, anyways this is not ready for a competition, no hand movement, no dragon movement, too much arm movement and nonsense in some parts. Also the scene is strange, how can he talk to a dragon just like that? where are they? what is happening?. You didn't even make a render. But it's good that you made the effort, keep going and practive, have fun!
Alex Mlqd:
This is an acting and lipsync exercice...try to show the face and expressions, feelings of your characters next time.
Katie Wyman:
Body movements seemed more theatrical then natural. I didn't feel as though the character was scared, despite the plot, but the concept of the situation did make me laugh. In future, treat your character like a person (what would he/she do? What is he/she thinking?) and body language will naturally come with getting in your character's mindset.
Filipe Pedrosa:
I like the idea, but the camera angle seriously kills it. I can't see his face and expressions, and the body language alone doesn't pull it off for me.
Janzelle:
You should really show the face.
JONG H. GOH:
I think Norman could have jumped when the big foot hits the ground
Animator: Matt Smith
Description: Max confronts his demon.
Experience: 0
Time taken: 8 hours